I always enjoy TwiggX's poses. She has a great look to her that is fun to edit. I had a lot of fun with this edit. Not sure where I was going with it though.
I really love what you did to sort of use a monochrome color scheme here of white, red, and touched of black. It really ties the piece together. The face is particularly well done, where I love what you'd done with the red wings on the face, and the geisha-esque touch of red on the lips. I also love the way you worked the hair to sort of fan out around and merge with the hair already in place.
However, what I feel detracts slightly from the piece is the not-well-integrated curly-dots on the hand--it just doesn't merge right and feels very flat. I do think that some red on the hand would help tie it together, but perhaps something else not quite as extensive across the knuckles that isn't bending correctly? Also, with the hair, while I love the fan out, the problem arises when the lines don't move correctly like hair--it would be better if the strands were more consistently defined, and went in the same direction (like real hair), in order to give it a strong sense of realism, even within the fantasy (particularly on the left side of the piece, closest to her face--it just does not merge up correctly with her hair on her shoulder there).
Overall, it's a really interesting concept, and I like where you went with it!
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