The overall composition in this piece is too cluttered and distracting with the bubbles overlaying the figure. The bubbles are really covering up a rather wonderful figure that should have more exposure instead of being covered. Try lowering the opacity of the bubbles and place them behind Holly as the make her stand out. This image will probably more than likely make viewers turn away because the bubbles make the eyes feel uneasy (again, going back to the cluttered composition). Also, with the outlined text to the left, it makes the composition look a bit unbalanced as well, maybe because it doesn't really fit the image. A quick suggestion for the canvas size is to give her more room to her left and bottom because she seems a little "trapped" with the canvas size looking as if it is closing in on her from those areas.

The figure in this image looks like she's screaming at you to let you know that she doesn't want to compete with the overlaying bubbles above her. She's also saying she should be the main focus, not have eyes turn the other way because of the distraction

hmm notes taken....thank you for the honest words

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LOOKS LIKE im in the soda bottle lol.. hehe cool effects

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mmmm soda

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7UP! Sorry I had to, it is a little cluttered but I still like it.

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